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Strike a Chord

Monday February 20, 2006

it has come to this....

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it has come to this--
you and I can never be

as your whispers betrayed my heart
rain fell like Heaven's tears

the truth is no longer hidden in darkness
your darkness now has become my truth

reach out to me no more, for I am gone
--it has finally come to this

GirlDownTheStreet -2006

Posted by GirlDownTheStreet at 11:26 PM - 25 Comments Add a Comment

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Another good one. Some day maybe you can tell what happened. |< << >> >|

by BlackNapalm (PM , CC ) on Monday February 20, 2006 @ 11:33 PM

Girl, you are really good at this.		\|< << >> >\|
by Dazey (PM , CC ) on Monday February 20, 2006 @ 11:36 PM

I like the poem Girl, but so much hurt?..... ..take care...love and happiness		\|< << >> >\|
by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Tuesday February 21, 2006 @ 3:35 AM

I love your poetry and the pictures too.		\|< << >> >\|
by Miss Lou (PM , CC ) on Tuesday February 21, 2006 @ 3:35 PM

Your photograph always captures the essence of your poem.		\|< << >> >\|
by Whit's Whittlings (PM , CC ) on Tuesday February 21, 2006 @ 10:00 PM

I see that youhave been a busy girl while I was at work, another beautiful Poem G.. Thanks for sharing... Scratch.		\|< << >> >\|
by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Tuesday February 21, 2006 @ 10:04 PM

This is so full of emotion, so wonderful. Sometimes I want to say more to you about your poems but I realize what I'm doing is talking to myself. If the mark of an excellent writer is that they are able to touch people's hearts, minds, and souls then consider yourself a good writer.		\|< << >> >\|
by MaryElizabeth (PM , CC ) on Wednesday February 22, 2006 @ 12:26 PM

Just stopped by to see how the poet is today....Colo		\|< << >> >\|
by Coloconnect (PM , CC ) on Saturday February 25, 2006 @ 7:59 PM

Fine work, sorry I don't get by more often. d		\|< << >> >\|
by E.M. Diesel (PM , CC ) on Saturday February 25, 2006 @ 8:07 PM

Perfect picture for a perfect poem. I always love reading poetry here..		\|< << >> >\|
by The River Rat (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 11:27 AM

Thank you BlackNapalm. One day I might tell what happened, though perhaps the poems give you an idea. Thanks for stopping by.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:35 PM

Hello Dazey. Thank you for the kind words. I don't know what else to do with all this inside sometimes.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:37 PM

Yes, Soulsearcher. A lot of hurt. But this is cathartic, isn't it. Thanks for the visit.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:38 PM

Miss Lou, I adore you. Thank you!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:39 PM

Good to see you again Whit. Thank you for the nice comment.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:40 PM

Hi Scratch. I haven't been around for a while, but feel very inspired again. In a good way! Thank you for all of your encouragement.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:41 PM

MaryElizabeth, I don't know what to say. Your comments make my heart swell. Thank you!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:42 PM

Thank you for stopping by Colo. It's always nice to see you. Hope you are doing well.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:44 PM

It's ok E.M. Diesel. I'm glad to see you anyway. Thanks for the company when you're able.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:45 PM

Hi River Rat. What a wonderful compliment. Thank you!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 3:46 PM

"The feel is never more real than the one that flows from the Loving heart that grasps a moment of the truth" and you express it so well...I feel ya...Love PoP'		\|< << >> >\|
by Be Bop (PM , CC ) on Saturday March 4, 2006 @ 5:25 PM

PoP you are so eloquent, and I thank you for the beautiful comments and the visit.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Sunday March 5, 2006 @ 9:39 AM

Hey Girl- I really love the photographs you put with your poetry too... Did you take those?? They're really good as is your poetry...-PolarB ;)		\|< << >> >\|
by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Wednesday March 8, 2006 @ 10:57 PM

I can truly identify with this one, but not for a love, but my parents.		\|< << >> >\|
by MindPower (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 16, 2006 @ 12:24 PM

Nothing I say seems adequate. You are gifted in verse.		\|< << >> >\|
by MrOrnery1851 (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 16, 2006 @ 8:49 PM

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