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Burn It Down

So burn it down
this love that cannnot serve us anymore

You got your Ever After by reckless default
be careful what you wish for

Now you're drowning in your sea of trepidation
where the water is not bluer, but green

And you reach out for me to help keep you afloat 
as your ship is going down with your dream

My love could not heal your broken soul before
so how could it mend you now?

And burn it down
this love I have inside... but just don't know how

GirlDownTheStreet 2006

Posted by GirlDownTheStreet at 10:43 PM - 13 Comments   Add a Comment  
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I almost feel that I should say nothing at all. Very beautiful.  
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by Stealtharachnid (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 12:18 AM




Another amazing poem G, thank you..Scratch.  
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 12:20 AM




Thank you, Stealth. Sometimes saying nothing "does" say it all, doesn't it. Thanks for the visit.  
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by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 8:26 AM




Scratch, I hope that one day I can write half as well as you. Thanks for your encouragement!  
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by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 8:30 AM




Beautiful poem and beautiful picture as well.  
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by Miss Lou (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 2:43 PM




Hello Miss Lou, and thanks for the nice comment. I love your new flying dove icon, too!  
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by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 5:48 PM




Wonderful poem---debyd  
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by johnnie (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 7:14 PM




all your poems are great. Loved reading them.  
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by The River Rat (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 8:12 PM




Debyd and RiverRat, thank you so much for the visit and your kind words!  
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by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Friday February 10, 2006 @ 11:48 PM




Another pearl...what gets me about your work is that it feels like you are expressing things that are inside of me that I can't express for myself. It's really quite a remarkable thing to have happen...thank you for your words!!!  
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by MaryElizabeth (PM , CC ) on Saturday February 11, 2006 @ 10:24 PM





Another really good one--great word visuals!
 
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by Carrot Cake (PM , CC ) on Monday February 13, 2006 @ 8:34 PM




Hello MaryElizabeth, thank you for your lovely words. Maybe we have more in common than we know and are kindred spirits! Thank you Carrot Cake for coming by. I appreciate your comments.  
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by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Thursday February 16, 2006 @ 11:37 PM




Powerful words.  
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by MindPower (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 16, 2006 @ 12:26 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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