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Strike a Chord

Saturday January 28, 2006

let me go

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you felt it, I know you did
your heart sensed me slipping away
letting go
breaking free of this bond
as you moved on with your life

           you panicked, I know you did
           reaching out, then hurting me again by
           your words
           never prepared to let me go
           or able to say goodbye

this bond is eternal, I know it is
cursed never to break free
you can't love
as I have loved you
please just let me go

GirlDownTheStreet 2006

Posted by GirlDownTheStreet at 3:34 PM - 19 Comments Add a Comment

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Love is much more beautiful when it is reciprocated in full measure. |< << >> >|

by Whit's Whittlings (PM , CC ) on Saturday January 28, 2006 @ 3:48 PM

Yes it is, Whit. Thank you for stopping by once more.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Saturday January 28, 2006 @ 3:54 PM

Love, you can't live with it, and can't live without it.		\|< << >> >\|
by Ivory (PM , CC ) on Saturday January 28, 2006 @ 5:15 PM

you really do have the soul of a poet...your words are written to be repeated and savored I hope you never quit writing...you have talent		\|< << >> >\|
by Coloconnect (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 2:08 AM

You are getting very artistic with the verse there Lady G, I'm really lovin it...Scratch.		\|< << >> >\|
by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 2:27 AM

Hello Ivory. Sometimes I wonder if you might be right. But I sure would like to try to live "with it" once. Thank you for visiting my blog.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 10:32 AM

Thank you Coloconnect. I enjoy your blog very much, and appreciate the compliment and encouraging words from you. It means a lot!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 10:39 AM

Scratch, your comment humbles me. Thank you very much. I can only aspire to someday write poetry half as well as you do!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 10:44 AM

Your poetry is excellent and touching, and the pictures are well chosen for your word expressions. Nice!!		\|< << >> >\|
by Dazey (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 1:07 PM

Thank you so much Dazey. I appreciate it.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 1:30 PM

Very, very nice. Enjoyed it.		\|< << >> >\|
by Miss Lou (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 1:36 PM

You're one of my favorites. I love coming to your blog. If there is something new I'm thrilled, if not I'm still thrilled because I get to read the piece one more time. Thank you for your work.		\|< << >> >\|
by MaryElizabeth (PM , CC ) on Monday January 30, 2006 @ 6:59 PM

Miss Lou, you are always so very kind. Thank you so much.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Monday January 30, 2006 @ 8:48 PM

Mary Elizabeth, I am so touched by your comment. I couldn't be more complimented than that! If only this were fiction I write about instead of the truth. Maybe some day Cupid will favor me with a better arrow?		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Monday January 30, 2006 @ 8:54 PM

This is amazing! It is definitely something to which I can relate! And you put it together so beautifully! Colo is right--you are extremely talented!		\|< << >> >\|
by Kaleidoscope (PM , CC ) on Monday January 30, 2006 @ 9:51 PM

Thank you very much, Kaleidoscope. Each post is an emotional thing for me and a piece of my heart at the same time. Thank you for stopping by and the lovely comment.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Monday January 30, 2006 @ 10:21 PM

Congrats on being featured! I knew you should have been a few posts ago. Keep writing, please. best d		\|< << >> >\|
by The Blackbird (PM , CC ) on Saturday February 4, 2006 @ 9:24 AM

Thank you Blackbird for the kind words, and thank you for stopping by.		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Thursday February 9, 2006 @ 10:45 PM

Powerful words... and I love you choice of pictures in all your posts! Thank you for your nice comment about my poetry in my blog "The Undissolved Bather"		\|< << >> >\|
by Annie (PM , CC ) on Friday March 10, 2006 @ 11:56 AM

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