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Strike a Chord

Wednesday January 4, 2006

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Love not taken…

Vows forsaken…

I was so mistaken...

It's over.
Smiles you’re faking…

Choices you’re making…

My hands are shaking…

Hearts are breaking…

Hurt and aching…

It’s over.

-Girl Down The Street 2006

(thanks for the inspiration of your poetry, Scratch)

Posted by GirlDownTheStreet at 1:03 AM - 16 Comments Add a Comment

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Your quite the poet yourself there, Girl Next Door, Bravo! I have to go to work now, check you later. Scratch. |< << >> >|

by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Wednesday January 4, 2006 @ 1:11 AM

Yes, Scratch is right - quite a poem. Love the image too. --johnnie		\|< << >> >\|
by johnnie (PM , CC ) on Wednesday January 4, 2006 @ 3:30 AM

Oh my, there are two of us..I thought I was so clever..mercy...your place is much more appealing than mine..nice to met you.		\|< << >> >\|
by girlnextdoor (PM , CC ) on Wednesday January 4, 2006 @ 7:54 AM

Thank you Scratch and Johnnie. Hello "other" girl!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlNextDoor (PM , CC ) on Wednesday January 4, 2006 @ 11:34 PM

This poem is real and flows perfectly to make it's point and fit the mood...You really are a poet...Colo		\|< << >> >\|
by Coloconnect (PM , CC ) on Thursday January 5, 2006 @ 12:26 AM

Nice to make your acquaintance, Ma'am. I enjoy your blog so far, keep up the nice versin', you're good. No sheet. =8-D Prank		\|< << >> >\|
by ThePrairiePrankster (PM , CC ) on Thursday January 5, 2006 @ 8:04 PM

My first time here, and I have been rewarded. I like your poem for its sparseness of language, its concentrated emotion and images, and most of all, for its simplicity. The picture helps the poem, too.		\|< << >> >\|
by Whit's Whittlings (PM , CC ) on Thursday January 5, 2006 @ 9:36 PM

Very nice poetry there!-Lou		\|< << >> >\|
by C Ray B (PM , CC ) on Thursday January 5, 2006 @ 11:00 PM

hello and welcome! Your words are beautiful and I hope you keep sharing them. I will return and hope I read more of this touching story...Nik		\|< << >> >\|
by nikki rae (PM , CC ) on Friday January 6, 2006 @ 2:19 AM

Wow, thank you Coloconnect! Ditto PrankofthePrairie!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlNextDoor (PM , CC ) on Friday January 6, 2006 @ 8:50 PM

I'm humbled, Whit. That was quite a compliment!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlNextDoor (PM , CC ) on Friday January 6, 2006 @ 8:52 PM

Hello Lou, and thank you for stopping in! Thank you also Nik. So many blogs for me to check out now. Thanks for the company everyone!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlNextDoor (PM , CC ) on Friday January 6, 2006 @ 8:55 PM

Grrrrl...Oh, I was debating on whether or not to change my name..you beat me to it...well you will still be the Girl Next Door to me..Elizabeth (psst,I came here thinking you had updated, I saw your blog scroll through the update ticker) Looking forward to your next post.		\|< << >> >\|
by girlnextdoor (PM , CC ) on Friday January 6, 2006 @ 9:15 PM

Hi Girl! Well since your GirlNextDoor nickname is also the name of your blog, and my GirlNextDoor nickname was different from my blog name, I decided to change my nickname and "go down the street" some, so we would not be confused for one another. Have a good night, Twin!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Friday January 6, 2006 @ 9:26 PM

Hi, I happened upon your blog last night and I've been thinking about it all day. What beautiful and soulful pictures! They tell a story all by themselves, the poems take it over the top. You are quite talented. "More, more" the audience shouted.		\|< << >> >\|
by MaryElizabeth (PM , CC ) on Friday January 13, 2006 @ 7:20 PM

Wayyyyy so late in acknowledging your comment, but thank you Mary Elizabeth!		\|< << >> >\|
by GirlDownTheStreet (PM , CC ) on Sunday January 29, 2006 @ 1:02 PM

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